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hope it works/ but i guess it does work. It probably just brings back an ass-ier version of michael lol well i don't know. but i do know that i'll
keep reading and can't wait for more.
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NOOOOOOO! Michael can't die!
OMG! What happens next??? I hope the Granolith works.....It just HAS to.
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Oh my God. This was soo sad
Poor Maria. I hope she will feel better soon and there is a way to save "her" Michael. I have the feeling she won´t be very pleased with the other Michael...
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Unfortunately I don't really have hope in the Granolith saving Michael- I have a feeling it will do something to bring the other one into contact with
Maria and the others...I have faith in you guys though so I'm not too worried. Love the interaction with Kyle and Isabel too!
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Luluzita
- Hmm, the other Michael taking care of Maria? Are
you sure?
Madhaj01 - This story is post-Graduation, and yes the Granolith is on Earth and works. We don't really know what happened to the Granolith - if Tess brought it back but didn't mention it. We write this story with the theory that Tess brought the Granolith back and put it in the cave, exactly where it was before.
And the reason why Maria didn't call for help was because she and Michael were in a secluded place where nobody would have heard them.
Maji343 - The Granolith is going to do something, don't worry. The question is, what will it do exactly?
FEHRIAN - Something will happen. We will never KILL Michael. Michael and Maria belong together, so expect a twist.
Candysteffi - Hmm, the Granolith will do something, that's for sure. The "other Michael", huh? Is he another Michael or the dead Michael… not so dead? Any ideas?
Starcrazed.roswellheaven - The Granolith has some tricks up its sleeve, so expect some surprises!
Part 3b
In the van Max was staring at the truck in front of him, focusing on maintaining an exact distance between the vehicles. He felt like he was going to lose his mind and he didn't know how to even begin dealing with losing Michael. He refused to let Maria's misguided beliefs get his hopes up because he had no misconceptions about the powers that the Granolith possessed.
He had felt the emptiness in Michael's body when he had tried to connect with him, the lack of essence that had made him alive. It was as if his very soul was gone and nothing remained but his cold, dead body. He hadn't been able to save his best friend, his brother, the only other male hybrid like him. The letters on the license plate in front of him suddenly became blurry and he reached up to rub his eyes, brushing away the tears that wouldn't stop falling.
Michael's intense presence had been a constant in his life for as long as he could remember, and now that he had been ripped away from them Max felt like he had lost the ability to breathe. What about Maria? his conscience prodded. What would happen to her once she was forced to accept that Michael was gone? He knew, after the summer they had spent hanging out a couple of years earlier, that when Maria DeLuca let herself love someone the way she loved Michael, it was intense and it was for the rest of her life. There was no halfway when she fell in love. She went into it just like she did anything else - with her whole heart and without holding anything back. She would never get over losing Michael, he thought. Never. Would she go on living or would she just give up?
What about Liz? he wondered. What would happen to her if she lost Maria? She was one of the strongest women he had ever known, but she had barely survived losing Alex; what would happen if she lost Maria too? No one was that strong. If anything happened to Maria, Liz would lose it. Their friendship, their bond, was too strong, and Liz just wouldn't be the same without Maria around.
He glanced in the rearview mirror, reaching up to readjust it so he could check on his wife. He could barely make out their shadows in the darkness, relying on what little light was provided by the headlights reflecting off of the truck in front of them.
Liz rubbed Maria's back, wishing she knew what to say in this situation. Her best friend was convinced that the Granolith was going to make things right again, fix it so that Michael wasn't dead, but Liz wasn't convinced that it was the answer. She was worried about how Maria was going to handle it if her plan backfired and the trip was for nothing. She watched the other woman as she carefully cradled Michael's head in her lap, rocking him gently as she spoke to him in such a soft voice.
Maria loved the surly, ill-mannered alien and if the Granolith couldn't save Michael, it was going to destroy her. She knew what it would do to her to if the unthinkable happened and she ever lost Max. She had felt him die when she was in Vermont, but a miracle had happened and she had gotten him back. Now Maria was going through a similar tragedy, but Liz had her doubts that such a miracle could happen twice, even with the hybrids and the mystery surrounding their existences.
"Maria…"
The blond slowly raised her head to look at her friend in the near-darkness. Her fingers continued to comb through his spiked hair, the contact necessary to her sanity. "He loves me, y'know." It was a statement, not a question. "I know most people don't understand him, they don't know what I see in him, but he loves me."
Her gaze dropped back down to him and her fingers traced over his features, ignoring the fact that his flesh was so cold. "Even when he was…" she swallowed with difficulty, "leaving, when he thought he was leaving me for good, he promised that he would never leave me." Tears spilled over and tracked down her cheeks. "He struggled to keep breathing long enough to tell me that… he promised."
She folded her body over him, her forehead pressed against his as she fought against the wave of desolation that she could feel trying to take hold of her. "It'll be okay, Michael, the Granolith will fix everything," she whispered.
Liz realized that she fell into that category of people Maria had been describing as she watched them; she had never understood Michael, and she had never known what it was that Maria saw in him. After months of being on the run with them, living in cramped quarters, and listening to their constant bickering, she had been ready to dump him on Maria's behalf. He was unbearable, rude, sarcastic, and she had never once seen him do a single thing to deserve his girlfriend's love and respect.
Their relationship had been strange, it had been filled with intensity, and it had certainly lacked the fairy tale quality, but now that it was too late Liz could see that she had never recognized what was right in front of her eyes. In his own way, nonverbal, gruff, and abrasive, Michael had loved Maria with a depth that defied explanation; mere words had never been enough to convey his feelings and he had known that. His last words… his last breath, had been for Maria, to reassure her that she wouldn't be alone.
Liz glanced up when she felt the van slowing and then turning. She could tell that they had left the highway, the bumpy ride indicating that they were traveling off-road now. She made her way up to the front, resting on her knees beside her husband. His knuckles were white from gripping the steering wheel so tightly. She could see the tears silently tracking down his cheeks and his pain was so close to the surface that she could feel it as if it were her own.
"Hey," she said softly, "how're you holding up?"
Max shook his head and used his shoulder to dry the right side of his face. "Do you think this is gonna work?" he asked, his voice rough.
"No. I think she doesn't know how to deal with this and she's desperate to come up with any possible solution that will put off the inevitable." She rubbed his shoulder. "I'm sorry, Max."
He nodded but kept his gaze glued to the truck in front of him as it bounced through the desert. He couldn't look at her; if he did he was going to lose his tenuous grasp on his control and he would fall apart. He took his right hand off of the steering wheel long enough to point out the outcropping of rocks looming up ahead. The cave where the Granolith was hidden was located within the towering boulders that were now just minutes away.
"I'll let Maria know."
Kyle parked in front of the mountainous rock formation and stared at it in silence for several minutes. He pushed the button on the side of his watch to illuminate the face so he could read the time. 3:37am. Next to him, Isabel had opened the door and was staring out into the night. She had fallen silent after arguing with him for the first couple of hours, but she had managed to hold herself together so far. He climbed out of the truck and stretched; his body was stiff from sitting in one position for so many hours and he could feel his spine popping into place.
Once Max pulled up beside them he went to help them carry Michael's body up the path that led to the secret entrance. Near the entrance Max waved his hand over the place where the sensor was hidden and after a moment a handprint became visible and a slab of the rock moved inward and slid back to allow them to enter. Inside the cave they gently placed his body on the ground and they all stood back as Maria slowly approached the mysterious object that was the Granolith. She walked around it several times, watching it for any indication that it was aware of their presence.
"How do you turn it on?" she asked, the question not aimed at any one specific person.
"It was only active once when the key was inserted."
Maria glanced at Max when he spoke, and forced her own voice to remain level in response to his ragged tone; she couldn't afford to fall apart now. "And we don't have that key?" He shook his head and she turned back to the machine, staring at it as she considered her next action. "I don't know how you work or how you communicate, but I need you to speak to me." The only sound in the chamber was the hum that emanated from the general vicinity of the Granolith. She walked up to it and placed her hand against it, barely controlling the urge to just curl up in a fetal position on the ground and let go. "You have to help him," she whispered, leaning forward and placing her forehead against the smooth surface. It wasn't cool as she had expected, instead it was warm to the touch and she could feel the vibrations that pulsed through it.
"Maria, it isn't gonna speak to you," Isabel said. "I've talked to it before, remember? It didn't respond to me either." She kept her gaze focused on the Granolith, irrationally hating it for everything that it represented and blaming it for everything that she had lost. "It's just a stupid alien device or something; it's not a sentient being with a conscience or the ability to - "
"The ability to interact with lesser beings is indeed within my capabilities," a mechanical voice rumbled. It seemed to come from all around them and not just from the device at the center of the chamber that was now glowing brightly. "Why have you come here?"
Maria took a couple of steps back and stared at it in awe. It could understand her and answer her. To her knowledge, and according to Isabel's own statement, it had never done that in the past. Why? Oh, right, because everything had to be so complicated where the aliens were concerned! But maybe it knew what they were there for, why they had come to seek it out. Maybe it knew somehow that it had to save Michael… or Rath, as the Granolith probably knew him. It was a question of life or death, so maybe that was why it had started to speak. "Granolith, you have to help us," she said insistently. "There was an accident and Michael… he was… he…" Oh, God, she couldn't say it! If she said it, it would be true! "He was hurt, badly, and - "
"You have brought him to me for what reason?"
Maria couldn't believe the Granolith's controlled responses. She hadn't expected it to be all warm and fuzzy or anything, but it was unemotional to the point of being cold. "I want you to fix it, to… to fix him. You're capable of many things and it's your job to watch over the hybrids."
"You have come with a request that cannot be granted." The response was dispassionate. "Once the hybrid ceases to exist there is no possibility of generating new life within it."
"Okay, fine, I'm not asking you to do that. But, you're capable of time travel."
"It is within my abilities."
"Then tell me how to do that, how to go back in time to prevent this from happening."
"Your request cannot be granted."
Maria's patience was quickly coming to an end. "Why not? If you possess the ability, why would you refuse to help him? He is - "
"Altering the events of the past in order to preserve a single being is not allowed. For many years the sacred laws have existed to prevent those who would change the past, present, or future for their own gain."
"You're refusing to help him? I seem to remember an occasion where you allowed time travel, so why are you refusing it now?" she demanded, shocked. She wasn't going to let the Granolith get away with this answer. She had heard all about time travel from Liz.
"The creators must be obeyed. Your request cannot and will not be granted."
"What? No! Come back here, we're not finished! You've got to - " Maria stopped when Liz put her hand on her shoulder, silently holding her and trying to make her realize that the Granolith had stopped interacting with her. The light that had been glowing so brightly while the Granolith was speaking dimmed suddenly, leaving only the dull green glow behind. Maria stared at the device, shell-shocked, unable to comprehend what it meant and unwilling to accept what it had said. She reached blindly for Liz's hand, desperately seeking strength in her best friend as she stood there, sightlessly staring at the powerful alien device, carefully hidden in a small cave near Roswell, New Mexico.
"Why doesn't it want to use time travel to save Michael?" she questioned in a lost voice. "It helped you and Max in the other timeline, remember? So, why is it refusing to help Michael? After everything he's been through… Hank, his miserable existence with that abusive animal, how can the Granolith do this? It can't just leave things this way… it can't just let Michael stay dead! It's not fair, Liz, it's not FAIR!!!"
Liz held Maria closer, trying her best not to break down and cry. She had an idea why the Granolith had refused to use its power to allow time travel. As it had said, it was against the rules, but in that first timeline Future Max had mentioned that she and Serena had modified the Granolith for time travel. Maybe they hadn't modified it only for that purpose, but they had bent the rules to use it for time travel. But the truth was she had no idea where to begin to alter the device. She hadn't been able to do it on her own in the first timeline, and Serena didn't exist in this one. Or she hadn't met her. Either way, she had no idea who or where she was.
Kyle looked around at his friends, his family, and knew that he was going to have to be the one to bring up the difficult, but necessary task that needed to be completed. It wasn't going to get any easier the longer they put it off, but he needed to do it in a way that would keep Maria from losing it. They had to be far away from Roswell, well on their way back to their new homes before that could be allowed to happen.
"Maria." He moved closer to her but refrained from taking her in his arms and offering comfort. "Maria, it'll be daylight in less than two hours, and you know we can't risk bein' seen around here. Maybe this…" he waved at the Granolith, "thing, whatever it is, has the answers, maybe it holds the key to getting Michael back, but it's not givin' it up right now." He crouched down a little to meet her gaze, easily reading the denial in her green eyes. "It's already admitted that it's capable of time travel, right? Well, we can come back when we have more time, convince it to do what needs to be done, but we've got to…" He felt it like a punch to the gut when recognition settled into her expression.
"You want to bury him. Here? In the desert? He'll be alone here, Kyle! You want me to just leave him here? I won't even be able to - "
Kyle looked at her with pity in his eyes. She was talking about Michael as if he were in a coma, not dead. Maybe that was why she hadn't totally lost it yet; it's what was holding her together. "Maria, we can always come back and try to convince this damn thing to cooperate, but we're runnin' outta time here. You know it's not safe here, and Michael would be havin' a fit if he knew everyone was here, risking discovery and capture just to bring him back."
Maria turned her head to look at Michael's body, swallowing with difficulty as she nodded. "You're right; that would piss him off. I just… I need a few minutes, Kyle."
He nodded in understanding. "We'll wait outside." He glanced at Liz, seeing that she had been listening to the entire conversation. Max and Isabel both looked shell-shocked and neither of them said a word as she gently herded them out of the chamber.
"Kyle?"
He turned back to Maria, his body halfway through the entrance. "Yeah?"
"You know that spot on the other side of the rocks? The shady spot by those scraggly little bushy things?" She cleared her throat when he nodded. "Michael liked that spot."
"I'll take care of it." He was gone then, leaving her alone with Michael's body.
"You never could make things easy, could you?" she murmured, dropping down beside Michael. Her fingers tangled in his soft hair and her heart thudded painfully in her chest as her other hand trailed down the side of his face and she registered just how icy his skin felt. "We've beat the odds before, Michael, and we'll beat them this time too. We've never been the type of people to just sit back and let life happen." She chuckled tearfully. "I'd like to think I was a little more diplomatic than you, but we made things happen, didn't we?" She pressed a lingering kiss to his lips. "We're not finished, Spaceboy, and no matter what it takes, I promise you I'll find a way to fix this."
"Maria?"
She wiped the stray tears from her eyes and turned her head to look at Kyle.
"We're ready."
"So are we." She kissed Michael one more time before standing up.
Half an hour later she watched as the last of the sand was smoothed out over the unmarked grave. She forced her emotions further down, terrified of what would happen if she released them. She had to hold it together; she had made Michael a promise and she had every intention of keeping it. This was only temporary, she reminded herself.
Her head snapped up when she heard a choking sound and tears suddenly clouded her vision when she saw Max drop the shovel in his hand and fall to his knees. Liz hurried to his side, kneeling in front of him and taking him in her arms. She cradled his shaking body, her hands rubbing his back in a soothing gesture while she whispered words of comfort through her own tears.
Not far away Isabel was watching her brother and Kyle was watching her as she began to shut down and close herself off.
Maria took it all in and felt her emotions building up into an uncontrollable mass and she knew she had to get away or she wasn't going to be able to keep it in any longer. Her gaze turned up towards the rocks that jutted out against the sky that was beginning to lighten, hinting at the pending sunrise.
Her emotions began to mutate from sadness, loss, hurt, and emptiness, to anger that was burning a hole in her chest and without conscious thought she began walking back to the cave.
*****
Michael stared at his reflection in the mirror over the sink, annoyed that he couldn't recall the nightmare that had interrupted his sleep. Nightmares weren't a normal occurrence for him and having one that had created the unfamiliar feeling of fear while the images remained elusive pissed him off. He didn't like experiencing things that he couldn't remember later, and the fact that fear had been involved bothered him more than he cared to admit.
After the night he'd had he should've been able to come back to his hotel room and sleep straight through what was left of the night. They had gone back to her house for a very long night and he was incredibly pleased with his performance. She… what was her name anyway? He frowned at his reflection for a moment before shrugging. He didn't give a rats' ass what her name was. Whatever her name was, she had been even more aggressive in bed than she had been at the jail and he'd had his hands full with her.
Generally, sex of that nature left him pleasantly worn out and once he'd ditched whatever lucky bitch had benefited from his sexual prowess, and he was back in his own bed he enjoyed the sex-induced coma that inevitably came afterwards.
But that luxury had been denied him this time and even his morning run hadn't taken the edge off. Knowing he was no closer to an answer he pushed away from the mirror and packed his things back into his saddlebags, left the key on the nightstand, and walked outside to his motorcycle.
He looked up at the pre-dawn sky before checking his watch. He could be in Santa Fe by noon and in some sweet little thing's panties soon after. He threw his leg over the seat and settled into it before turning the key and revving the engine several times. An old man sitting on the porch reading his newspaper by porch light looked at him in disapproval and Michael flipped him off and revved the engine once more for good measure.
He had spent the entire night fucking a beautiful woman and he was irritable and ready to pick a fight with someone. Maybe when he got to Santa Fe he'd find some idiot in need of a good ass-kicking and get that out of his system before looking for some hot bitch in need of fucking. He rolled his shoulders back and took a deep breath before pulling out into the quiet street.
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Interesting to see the Granolith talking to them. I can see why it would have made an except last time...the world was ending. How heartbreaking to see Max and
Isabel fall apart/close off like that. Wonder what Maria is up to going back into the cave and can't wait to see what it means for that other Michael.
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woo the granilith talks.... come on... it was ok for max to use it for time travel... but maria can't use it to save michael's life..So unfair!!! but i
like the story
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this is so sad. I'm crying through the whole thing. i really hope Maria can talk some sense into that damn granolith. it's just not fair that Max and
Liz can use it, but Maria can't use it to help Michael.
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OMW! Why won't the Granolith help him??? SOOOOOO unfair, to help Max travel back in time to 'Save the World' but not save Michael.
HEEELLLLOOOOO!!!! Michael is NEEDED to 'Save the World' His part of the "Four Square" so doesn't it basically count as the same thing??? Wonder what Maria's gonna do at the Cave??? Hurry back soon Sumi |
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Angel and Magali, you're killing me with angst here! This story is already tremendous.
ELECTRICCANDY.NET! | EC Fan Fiction Archive | Livejournal | Michael Guerin is Love Michael only ever loved and wanted Maria (yes, as in Deluca), and they're living happily ever after with 10,000 feisty kidlets, a big old house with a porch and one of them white picket fence things. IT'S JUST A FACT. |
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Hey,
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oh poor maria!!
i hope she will find out a solution and bring us michael back! why are the other not helping her while she is determined to do something, they all seemed passive!
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Starcrazed.roswellheaven - The Granolith is supposed to be so powerful so why can't it have a spirit or something equivalent? Like being a super computer. But, yes, the Granolith will act and yes, there will be consequences. Luluzita - The Granolith was "changed" - Liz and Serena bent the rules to get it to time travel in the first timeline. Here, no Serena, so no bending the rules. Emadaps - You cried? Then our goal was reached. It was supposed to be a very emotional part. Something will happen with the Granolith, don't worry. FEHRIAN - In the first timeline, a whole planet needed to be saved, here it's just one being. That could explain the Granolith's reasoning. Girlinacoma - Thanks, glad that you like the story. We hope that you'll continue reading it. It's going to be a bumpy ride. Maji343 - Thanks for reading and for crying. Lino84 - Thanks for reading and don't worry, updates every Monday. Madhaj01 - Max and Isabel are lost in their own pain; they can't help Maria. And, both Kyle and Liz don't believe that the Granolith can save Michael, so they don't know how to act with Maria and her obsession with the Granolith helping. Part 4 Maria ran into the chamber that housed the Granolith, stumbling in her haste to reach it. Her heart was pounding from the exertion of climbing the side of the rocky incline and her emotions were swirling darkly within her, building into a fury that couldn't be contained. Her breathing was rapid as she inhaled and exhaled loudly through her nose. She paced around the device, her eyes moving over it as she considered the best plan of attack. Her movements were stilted, edgy, and she wanted nothing more than to destroy the thing, but it was her only hope of getting Michael back. "You think you're so damned powerful, so important, so worthy of being worshipped or revered, or whatever it is that your civilization uses you for, that you can just sit here and refuse to save someone who is essential to the survival of your own people!" she ranted. "You can travel through time, you can undo a goddamned alien invasion, and you've apparently had way too much time to sit here on your… your… your ass if you've got one, and let yourself begin to believe you're a hell of a lot more important than you are! If you're so important why are you here on earth and not on Antar, being worshipped by your public? You have the power to choose whether or not someone lives or dies and you do nothing, you worthless piece of shit!" She screamed in frustration and picked up a baseball-sized rock, preparing to throw it at the device when it began to glow. "Yet you seek my assistance," the mechanical voice rumbled. Maria shook her head, disbelief warring with a burning hatred when she heard the cold, detached voice once more. She was certain she had detected arrogance in its statement and that only fueled the flames of the fire that was raging inside of her. "You can alter time, prevent that accident from happening." "It is within my abilities." "I know it's within your abilities, you useless sonofabitch! You let Max travel back in time to change it. Is that because he's the king so it automatically means he's worthy of breaking the sacred rules?" She glanced down at the rock in her hand and hurled it at the Granolith, unsurprised when it merely bounced off of what she was sure was a force field of some sort. "You won't protect him but you'll protect yourself." Her voice dripped with disdain. "I'm waiting for an answer to my question." "The choice to alter time to save a single being is not within my powers, it is strictly prohibited by the creators. Modifications were made at the time - " "I don't give a damn about modifications!" she yelled, unable to reconcile how an entity such as this could possess such power and do nothing with it. "Do you know where your king is? He's on the verge of losing his sanity right at this very moment because his brother, his best friend, and his second in command is lying dead under six feet of sand!" She beat her fists against the device, uncaring that it wasn't registering the fact that it was being hit over and over. She didn't notice the prickling sensation at first, the feeling that something was probing deep within her subconscious, but when it became more insistent she jerked back away from the Granolith. "What're you doing?" "Your emotions are connected to the hybrid." "What have I been saying since I got here?" she asked, frustrated by its lack of understanding. "This hybrid is necessary to your existence?" Relief flooded her system when it posed the question in its controlled, emotionless tone. "Yes!" "You would go anywhere to be with him?" It chose its next words carefully. "There could be changes, possibly differences - " "I don't care! Just get me back to Michael; I don't care about anything else!" Maria's breath froze in her throat for several seconds, wondering what the Granolith had in mind. She would almost swear, as she stood there looking at it, that it was… thinking, considering all aspects of some problem before making a decision. It had turned a dark shade of blue, but the glow surrounding it showed that it was active, that whatever being was inside was somehow working towards a solution for Michael. She had managed to awaken its conscience, its responsibility towards the hybrids. Or, at the very least, she had made it consider the possibilities. She wasn't sure what it intended to do but something monumental was going to take place and she was ready, she could feel it in her bones. She would do anything to save Michael; she would travel to the ends of the world, the universe, to get him back and give him a new chance at the life that he so deserved. A red light shot out of the Granolith, startling her. She raised her head to look at it, fascinated by the beautiful burgundy color that it was displaying. A strange sensation began to take her over, leaving her powerless; she could feel her own body escaping her control and she was physically drawn to the device until she finally collided with it. Expecting to be hurt, she closed her eyes, unaware that she was being drawn through the Granoliths' shield, unharmed. She opened her eyes and her gaze darted around, realizing that she was inside the device. Fear seized her and the feeling of truly being alone suddenly overcame her. She had a last thought for her mother, whom she regretted leaving the way she had, doing to her mother what her father had done to them so long ago. She thought about Liz and she hoped that she and Max were going to be truly happy. Kyle, Isabel, Alex, the sheriff, Laurie, Jeff Parker, Grandma Claudia, Brody, and Sydney… all people she had known and loved, and whose faces were swirling in her mind. She tried desperately to focus on Michael, to tell herself that she was going back to him, when everything suddenly began to accelerate. Feeling dizzy and afraid she quickly recalled Max's tale of the Granolith taking Tess inside and sending her to Antar. It had done this before and it was going to do it again, for Michael. Relief settled over her as her eyes closed, her breathing began to slow down, and a welcoming black veil fell over her, ready for the Granolith to take her to whatever time and place it had chosen. ***** Kyle's gaze shot up to the entrance that led to the Granolith when he felt a rumbling beneath his feet. "Oh, my God," Liz whispered, leaning away from Max so she could look towards the cave. A bright flash of light caused her to turn away and close her eyes to protect herself. Fear shot through her and she wondered what the Granolith had done as she rushed inside to get to Maria and remove her from the cave. Desperately, she shoved displaced rocks out of her path, clawing her way into the pod chamber, ignoring Kyle who was yelling at her to come back. She couldn't listen to him; she wasn't going to let another friend die or get hurt by an alien, whether that alien was alive or not. She reached the pods and crawled inside one of them, feeling Max's soothing presence for just a fleeting moment. She smiled slightly. She was inside Max's pod, no doubt about it. She continued on, her hands scraped and bruised, but her will to reach Maria strong enough to allow her to push past the pain. She finally reached the inner chamber where the Granolith stood tall and her eyes scanned the small area, noting that there was no sign of Maria inside. She turned her eyes towards the device, almost afraid to ask it what had happened. She was trying to formulate a question when Kyle appeared behind her, followed by Max and Isabel. Liz's eyes immediately went to Max. He looked so devastated, so broken, and she couldn't stand to see him in so much pain. She went to him and took him into her arms. "Max, whatever happened here, the Granolith is going to fix it. I don't know how, but Michael will be back." His dark, pain-filled eyes turned towards her. She sounded so sure. Why wasn't she scared for Maria? She wasn't there any longer, that much was obvious, but they didn't know where she was… where the Granolith had sent her. He spoke then, his voice husky and unsure. "Liz, I know you think that, but if the Granolith had changed its mind, sent her back in time, don't you think the change should have been instantaneous for us? Shouldn't we be… somewhere else, with no recollection of…" Max stopped, unable to say the words. Michael's death was too fresh, too unbearable to possibly put into words. Liz bit her bottom lip, worrying it with her teeth. She was thinking the same thing but she didn't want to worry Max or Isabel, who was looking at her with hope in her eyes. She wished she had all the answers, but she didn't. She turned towards the Granolith and asked the question they all wanted the answer to, "Where is Maria?" The Granolith glowed for a second before answering. "She is where she is meant to be." "Where?" Liz questioned insistently. Her best friend was lost somewhere without her, without any of them, and she had to know what had happened. "Where? Or rather, when?" The light in the cave seemed to get weaker and weaker until the alien device turned black. A soft, purring sound could be heard, as if the Granolith had fallen into a deep sleep and wasn't there any longer. Liz was on the verge of kicking it to get an answer to her questions when Kyle's voice reached her. "We've gotta get outta here now," Kyle said as he reached out to grab Isabel's arm and pulled her to her feet. "There's no way that went unnoticed." He helped Liz get Max out of the cave and they all ran as fast as their legs could carry them. Liz felt a twinge of guilt for leaving Maria behind but she was gone, somewhere out of reach. She sent a prayer to God above that wherever she was, Michael was with her. Kyle motioned for her to get into the drivers' seat while he reached over to secure the seatbelt around Max. He was still unresponsive, his features ravaged by a devastation too great to comprehend. "Go back home," he instructed when Liz slid in behind the wheel and looked at him. "No phone calls. Matter of fact, give me your phone and I'll have Isabel dispose of yours and ours at the same time. Use the usual method to contact us in three days to let us know you're safe, and we'll do the same." He sighed as he patted Max's shoulder. "You guys be careful and stay off the interstate as much as possible." Isabel watched them go before turning back to look at the path the Granolith had taken. "Good luck," she whispered. ***** Michael scanned the landscape as the wind whipped past him and he barely glanced at the large, colorful sign on the left side of the highway that proudly proclaimed the next town had the best food this side of the border. His stomach rumbled, reminding him that he hadn't eaten since lunchtime the day before and he sped up, cutting off another car to make the exit in time. He smirked at the sound of a horn, absently wondering if people really thought they were really making their displeasure known by honking their horns. He drove through the town, eyes watching for a bar that would meet his requirements. He didn't want anything nice; he wanted something that catered to people who didn't ask questions, who weren't interested in talking. And, hey, if it just happened to have strippers that was just a bonus. The town was located relatively close to a military installation so he wanted a bar that catered to military types. He found the area that he was looking for after half an hour and he parked in front of the first bar and walked inside to check the place out. The interior was dimly lit, the men gathered in groups around the pool tables or the catwalk where the strippers would soon be coming out to provide the entertainment. He settled at a table at one end of the bar and ordered a drink, debating which of the men would be most likely to ignore regulations and engage in a fight. He was in the process of taking a drink from the bottle in his hand when a feeling of warmth and… what was that, excitement? Happiness? What the hell was going on? He looked around the bar, already knowing what he would find, and his irritation shifted up a notch when he verified that there wasn't a single woman in sight. Excitement he could understand - if he had been in the presence of an attractive woman and sex was on the menu. Happiness, well, he wasn't sure he believed such a notion actually existed. He scanned the room once more, seeking a viable target, an opponent who could hold their own against him. He was barely conscious of the music getting louder, paying no attention to the women slinking around on the stage as he felt the aggression surging through his veins. First nightmares and now warm, fuzzy feelings; he didn't understand what was going on, but it was pissing him off. He looked up when something soft slid against his neck and he turned his head to look at the stripper, already
bare from the waist up, as she slid a silky scarf around his neck. He watched her as she moved around him, her body
completely in sync with the music as she danced. He waited for the familiar feeling of arousal, anticipating it when
she straddled him and started to grind her pelvis against him. He was ready for it… any second now…
Michael's dark eyes skimmed over the sea of female flesh behind her, all in various stages of nudity and he frowned when he realized that there wasn't a single one there that he was interested in. His body was responding but not the way it normally did and it was pissing him off. What the fuck was up with that? he wondered, feeling anger pushing through the surface and he knew he had to do something, quick. "Slow starter, hmm?" she growled throatily. His eyes turned to ice in the space of a heartbeat. "Funny thing about the male body," he muttered coldly, "give it enough stimulation and it'll react predictably." The woman's movements stilled and she frowned. "What?" "Get lost, bitch; my dick doesn't go near anyone who's been ridden as much as you." "Don't talk to the lady like that, man." Michael looked up at the man who had spoken and felt adrenaline rush through his veins. This was what he had been looking for when he had chosen this particular bar; the man defending the lady's honor was big, military, and he would be able to hold his own in a fight. He shoved the woman off of him, ignoring her indignant shout as he stood and faced off against the man. He met the challenging gaze directed at him and his fists clenched at his sides in anticipation of the coming fight. "You owe the lady an apology." "Not gonna happen," Michael muttered as he swung hard. Satisfaction washed over him when his fist connected with the man's jaw, the sound of flesh and bone connecting giving him the release he had been waiting for. People scattered to get out of the way when the man charged towards him, bending at the waist and ramming his shoulder into Michael's gut, lifting him up off of the floor. He brought his hands down sharply, the sides connecting with the Marine's neck. The man released him and he dropped back down to his feet. The man quickly recovered and came after him again, this time with a quick uppercut that connected with Michael's jaw and he felt his head snap back from the force of the blow. He stumbled back several steps and hit the side of one of the pool tables, momentarily pausing to breathe. He wiped blood from the corner of his mouth and focused on getting his breathing back under control. He reached back and his right hand curled around the pool cue that had been abandoned by one of the players when the fight had started. The Marine came after him again and he swung the pool cue into the man's ribs, rolling his shoulders back when the man grunted and backed off momentarily. It was only a matter of seconds before the big man advanced on him once more and Michael threw the pool cue on the floor before launching himself at the man. He took a sharp hit to his ribs and he knew it was going to leave a bruise but he didn't care, he just wanted to do some damage. He got in several satisfying punches before someone hit him from behind and he automatically folded in on himself for a moment. Kidney shot, he thought, wincing. Great, now he was gonna be pissin' blood for the next couple of days. He straightened up, pushing the pain away, and whirled around to look at the man who had thrown the punch while his back was turned. He looked at the young guy, maybe nineteen or twenty years old, probably a new recruit, and he saw red. He barreled into the younger man, shoving him back until the guys' back hit the edge of the bar. It took three well-placed punches before the guy slumped to the floor unconscious. "Dumbass," he snorted as he turned back to the Marine and flexed his hands. "I think you two have done enough damage for today," a new voice spoke up above the silence that had fallen over the crowd. Michael glanced over his shoulder and frowned at the cops making their way through the sea of customers who had gathered to watch the fight. God, if this day got any worse he was gonna throw himself off of the tallest building he could find. "We're gonna take you boys down to the jail," the first cop said. "Maybe a night in lockup will calm you down and make you think twice about getting into barroom brawls." He approached the two combatants without any concern, pulling out a pair of handcuffs and securing Michael's wrists behind his back while his partner did the same to the other guy. "You're wastin' your time," Michael said. "I'll be out in an hour." "Son, you'll be sittin' in a holdin' cell in an hour." "I want my phone call." "You'll get your call when we get to the station," the second cop spoke up as he herded the big Marine outside. Michael shoved the cop back when he reached out to take his arm. "I can walk just fine on my own," he snarled. He was demanding his phone call as soon as they walked through the front entrance and the cop finally removed the handcuff from his left wrist and attached the second cuff to a metal ring mounted to a desk. The man grabbed the phone from the other end of the desk and slammed it down on the scarred surface in front of Michael. "Call who you wanna call, boy, but you're spendin' the night in a cell." "Wanna bet?" Michael dragged the man's chair closer and took a seat, slouching down and staring at the man insolently as he punched a number in. He propped his feet up on the edge of the desk and leaned back, waiting for an answer. When the call was finally answered from the opposite end by a deep, gravelly voice he grinned; he had managed to drag the old man out of bed again. "Hey, Xavier, gotta problem," he said by way of greeting. Xavier Coulson considered throwing the phone into the pool and ignoring the man on the other end. Even from thousands of miles away Michael Guerin was giving him a headache. "What've you gotten yourself into this time?" He relayed his current situation to the man on the other end of the phone and waited for the explosion he knew was coming. "You called the emergency number for this?" the man shouted angrily. He had two beautiful, exotic, women in his bed and he had been forced to put a halt to their activities when the call had been patched through. This wasn't the first time he had been on the verge of fucking a beautiful woman and had to wait because of some problem that had come up, a problem that Guerin had most likely caused; it was like the bastard had some sort of radar that went off any time Xavier was about to indulge his wilder side. "You do know that if you weren't so goddamned good at your job I'd have you shot for all the trouble you cause me, right?" He sighed in resignation. "Put the arresting officer on the phone. And Michael? If you call me one more time for this kind of bullshit I will have you shot." Michael handed the phone over to the cop and watched the man's face as Xavier explained a few things to him. The color slowly drained from his face and his eyes widened as he glanced at the man he had taken into custody. Michael's expression was smug as he walked out of the police station, knowing there would be no record of the incident. He debated whether he wanted to eat or not and finally decided to wait until he reached Santa Fe. He pulled his keys out and tossed them back and forth from one hand to the other as he passed the bar and moved to his motorcycle.
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well i'm glad that the granolith finally did something. Now i'm
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uhhhhh this michael is very strange,,,,,,
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Amazing part, Maria just about made me cry.
ELECTRICCANDY.NET! | EC Fan Fiction Archive | Livejournal | Michael Guerin is Love Michael only ever loved and wanted Maria (yes, as in Deluca), and they're living happily ever after with 10,000 feisty kidlets, a big old house with a porch and one of them white picket fence things. IT'S JUST A FACT. |
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i hope things will work out:D
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I'm glad to see the granolith gave in and did something, but now i wonder what it did and where it took Maria. Michael seems to always look for trouble for
no apparent reason. i wonder if that warm feeling he was having was related to Maria being transported to supposedly be with him.
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Well, I'm finally caught up, and I'll tell you, I'm getting the sense that this could end up being an epic of a fic. I kept wondering why
you said that people might hate you after Part 3. For the record, I think killing Michael is a brave thing to do in a fic, and in the case of this story,
it's a genius thing to do. The suspense is so . . . suspenseful! I'm really sitting here on the edge of my seat trying to figure all this out.
It's almost as confusing as Lost.
Maria was desperate after Michael died. She did what she thought she had to do, but did she make a mistake? And will she ever be able to correct it and be with "her" Michael again? It's interesting that this story will have two endings. I wonder which one I'll choose . . . And one last thing: Amazingly well-written fic. I'm sure you already know that. The idea and the execution of the idea is just fascinating. I can't wait to read more! -April
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